The joy on her face was palpable. Everyone who saw her knew that she had made it there after a lifelong struggle. Hiding and fighting everything that stood on her way to reach the zenith…So there was a paradise after all.
She was in a trance like state. Her subtle smile and the wonder and joy as she looked and absorbed every title, every detail, in every color and design. Tears ran down her face. Her escape from a small town in
This is a very strong first post. It gives a strong visual to the reader and gets him/her very involved and eager to "see" more. The ending of the post is equally good because it leaves one with a sharp contrast in what one was initially imagining. Very intriguing. I am very interested to know what happens next! Please continue!
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